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Okay, so in this assignment, i'm finding the eight mistakes that were made.
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I'm starting with, when i say line one, i'm starting with the line that begins with the word spyware.
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That's where the actual paragraph that they want you to analyze starts with.
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It.
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So the first mistake i have is in line one, you need to add the word your before the word computer because it says someone sends it to computer.
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It's more correct if you say your computer.
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Okay.
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Now also in line one, remove the letter s at the end of the word knowledge.
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It says someone sends it to your computer without your knowledges or permissions.
01:01
So you're also going to remove the s from the end of the word permission.
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It should not be knowledges and permissions.
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It should be knowledge and permission.
01:14
Okay, those should be singular, not plural.
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Okay.
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Then in line two, we're going to remove the word an.
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It's the last word on that line, and it comes before the word information, which is information is the first word on line three.
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So we don't need an in there because it says spyware often records an information.
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No, not an information, just information about your computer use.
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Okay, then in line four, remove the s at the end of the word information.
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So because it says, it gives information to advertisers or other people who want to collect informations on you.
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No, want to collect information on you...