[[[MY PROFESOR PROMPT): By using the formal “whereas” and “resolved” structure we see in governmental bills, Layli Long Soldier’s long poem, “Whereas,” explores apologies, connecting social events to the personal events of her family.
This statement is more precise. The writer has identified what the author is doing and how the author is doing it. While it still isn’t arguable enough, this statement gives more direction and specificity. In short, the reader has a better idea of what this writer is talking about, but the argument still isn’t quite clear.]]]