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The writer is considering deleting the following clause from the preceding sentence (placing a period after the word racetrack where he walked horses to keep them in good shape. Should the writer make this deletion? A. Yes, because the information is unrelated to the topic addressed in this paragraph. B. Yes, because the information diminishes the musical accomplishments and successes of Cab Calloway. C. No, because the information explains the reference to the racetrack, which might otherwise puzzle readers. D. No, because the information shows how far Cab Calloway came in his life.

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   The writer is considering deleting the following clause from the preceding sentence (placing a period after the word racetrack
where he walked horses to keep them in good shape.
Should the writer make this deletion?
A. Yes, because the information is unrelated to the topic addressed in this paragraph.
B. Yes, because the information diminishes the musical accomplishments and successes of Cab Calloway.
C. No, because the information explains the reference to the racetrack, which might otherwise puzzle readers.
D. No, because the information shows how far Cab Calloway came in his life.

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08/19/2021

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The writer is considering deleting the following clause from the preceding sentence (placing a period after the word racetrack where he walked horses to keep them in good shape. Should the writer make this deletion? A. Yes, because the information is unrelated to the topic addressed in this paragraph. B. Yes, because the information diminishes the musical accomplishments and successes of Cab Calloway. C. No, because the information explains the reference to the racetrack, which might otherwise puzzle readers. D. No, because the information shows how far Cab Calloway came in his life.

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Key Concepts

Contextual Clarity

This concept involves providing sufficient background information within a sentence so that readers can clearly understand all references. In the context of revision, it means evaluating whether additional clauses or details help clarify otherwise ambiguous statements for the reader.

Sentence Revision

This key concept focuses on the process of revising sentences by weighing the benefits of conciseness against the risks of losing essential background or explanatory information. It requires determining which details are necessary to maintain the precision and overall coherence of the text.

Reader Comprehension

This concept emphasizes the importance of ensuring that readers are not left puzzled by potentially unclear references or omissions. In editing, it guides the writer to include information that aids understanding and to avoid removing elements that serve to bridge ideas or explain context.

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