Read each of the example theses below and describe in a very short paragraph (2-3 sentences should suffice) what problems or historical pitfalls you think each thesis displays. Below your description of the problems displayed in each thesis, please revise the thesis to make it clearer, more precise, and more convincing. Do this for each of the 3 theses. The thesis may need to be substantially changed to avoid some of the problems that you have identified. So, feel free to modify the focus of the thesis as well as its wording. Basically, this question is asking the student to describe what is wrong with these theses and then to revise the thesis.
Thesis 1:
Ignorance of recently discovered connections between oral and general health created a professional distinction between dentistry and general medicine that lasted for centuries.
Thesis 2:
Germ theory improved countless lives and changed modern medicine forever.
Thesis 3:
Adding to a long history of women's health issues being overlooked, endometriosis causes debilitating pain for millions of women in the United States each year and remains under-diagnosed due to a lack of funding, training, and outreach.